There is a quirky rhythm in your bass part. I like the triplet feel, but the rhythm isn't precise. Also, in your percussion the tamborine part seems out of place, and I'd like to hear more of a groove to work with your bass part. Less toms (except for the fill) and more snare would be nice. The drums really need a strong 2 and 4 here. I love the piano, and the scratch sound. Nice fill with the reverse cymbal.
There is a quirky rhythm in your bass part. I like the triplet feel, but the rhythm isn't precise. Also, in your percussion the tamborine part seems out of place, and I'd like to hear more of a groove to work with your bass part. Less toms (except for the fill) and more snare would be nice. The drums really need a strong 2 and 4 here.
ReplyDeleteI love the piano, and the scratch sound. Nice fill with the reverse cymbal.